Film Review by my Little Brother

 My brother critiqued my group and I's short film. He said that out of ten he would rate it an eight. He didn't like a couple things. The first is that the quality seemed really grainy. The second is he didn't like the fact that the camera seemed a little bit shaky. The third is that the filter on the film looked "old". The fourth is that he doesn't like the music because he feels that it doesn't fit with the thriller theme. My brother also thinks that in the scene where James was walking on the sidewalk there should be a slight build up of music, like a note getting louder. He also said that he liked many things. He said he enjoyed watching most of the short film. The first thing he liked was the intr
o that says "Chills and Thrills". He said that it looked very professional. He said the crackling sound of ice goes well with the name "Chills and Thrills", as well as the icy-looking font. The second thing he liked was the fact that the whole beginning of the title sequence seemed professional, up to the definition of Murphy's Law. He also said the story build up kept him intrigued. The fourth thing he liked was the tracking shot of James walking. The fifth was the close-up of James's face after he turned around. The sixth thing he liked was the transition from scene to scene because it was smooth and not choppy. Overall, he liked the film. However, his critiques will be taken into consideration for the final product.